Spoiler review: The writing quality is very good. But the story development wasn't very interesting at first and some things weren't explained at all. Firstly the mc keeps saying he has combat experience from a game but the author didn't say much about what kind of game it was. You would think it's something like a Vr game but sometimes the way he talks about the game makes it seem like it isn't that. The memory palace ability also wasn't explained enough at all. Some things also feel like the author just made them up on the spot for convenience like when the mc gets an artifact that gives a boost in speed based on whether he's in pain or not. He suddenly mentions how he's always in pain apparently due to his soul being damaged during reincarnation. But that wasn't mentioned before at all. There are also some things that are way too similar to Author's pov. The mastery of a weapon art or something being called "world splitter" here which is the name of keiki style's 4th movement in author's pov.But! That aside at around 70 or chapters this novel has a lot of greatly detailed action scenes and around chapter 85 Mc starts having character development. That's when the novel became very fun to read for me. I hope the story keeps improving but even before that I hope the things I mentioned are explained better and maybe changed a bit so the shortcomings in the start can be somewhat dismissed.
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The amount of people who would read 70 chapters for character development to START is nonexistent. Thanks for saving everyone's time.
The writing quality really was the only thing driving me forward at first. And yeah, not everyone is patient enough to read through 60 or 70 ish chapters for things to get good. Even then it's not like it suddenly became amazing. It just started improving from that point onwards.
