Alright after reading quite a handful of chapters I now know what's up with this.Overlord and Tensura aren't probably but CERTAINLY my favorite animes, however to my disappointment it wasn't that greatly portrayed.. Lemme explain ; I didn't feel 'that' element that made it look like a true overlord fic, Author tried amalgamating the two universes but to a point where we can't know where's where and what's what.I couldn't comprehend a few dozen chapters and it felt like reading a void of words. While a few chapters were filled with explanations we really didn't need.I'm sorry i didn't like this fic but u think the author shouldn't feel discouraged, on the contrary he must work harder and accept criticism for the better. [img=update][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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