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2023-08-05 21:08

Alright after reading quite a handful of chapters I now know what's up with this.Overlord and Tensura aren't probably but CERTAINLY my favorite animes, however to my disappointment it wasn't that greatly portrayed.. Lemme explain ; I didn't feel 'that' element that made it look like a true overlord fic, Author tried amalgamating the two universes but to a point where we can't know where's where and what's what.I couldn't comprehend a few dozen chapters and it felt like reading a void of words. While a few chapters were filled with explanations we really didn't need.I'm sorry i didn't like this fic but u think the author shouldn't feel discouraged, on the contrary he must work harder and accept criticism for the better. [img=update][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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ChesterCure
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yeah, the fic isn't for everyone and glad you made concrete review

JackYoda
JackYodaLv3

Há senas +18 ou é apenas um harém?

ChesterCure:yeah, the fic isn't for everyone and glad you made concrete review
ChesterCure
ChesterCureAuthor

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JackYoda:Há senas +18 ou é apenas um harém?
JackYoda
JackYodaLv3

oh sorry, the translator sent the message translated into my language I asked if there are 18+ scenes?

ChesterCure:English
JackYoda
JackYodaLv3

Are there 18+ scenes or is there just a harem?

ChesterCure:English
ChesterCure
ChesterCureAuthor

yes

JackYoda:Are there 18+ scenes or is there just a harem?
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