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NyxOuroboros
NyxOuroborosLv111yr
2023-08-23 12:30

Unfortunately it's very boring to read, it's like watching various NPCs interact without any emotion, even in fights. It is extremely vague and everything is copied from the Wiki, with the protagonist constantly complaining about how weak he is compared to Guy and Milim. Instead of concentrating on Overlord and TenSura, the car puts other universes and appearance, apart from Chat. In any case, the beginning was good and the idea of ​​Overlord and TenSura the same.

Crimson Monarch: Endless Journey.

ChesterCure
4.2
133 Chs

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Zenon00125
Zenon00125Lv2

What do you mean, most if not all characters are game NPCs and others are fictional characters so technically all NPCs I don't understand you hahahahhahaha

1yr
NyxOuroboros
NyxOuroborosLv11

Intelligence chases you but you are faster. What I mean is that the author does not know how to interpret the characters in a way that readers feel like we are inside the story, he does not know how to interpret the emotions and the impact.

Zenon00125:What do you mean, most if not all characters are game NPCs and others are fictional characters so technically all NPCs I don't understand you hahahahhahaha
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Having a harem and no romance is completely stupid

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LewdSenPai
LewdSenPaiLv12

I'm a simple guy, because this Fanfic contains Overlord and Tensura, here I am! Since Albedo and co from 'Overlord' and Shion and co from 'Tensura' were confirmed in the harem, again… HERE I AM!

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LastsonofZod
LastsonofZodLv4

This is Great![img=recommend] An op Fanfic with elements from both Overlord and Tensura. The writing is incredible. I hope that Author-san won't end up dropping this masterpiece[img=update][img=update][img=update]

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breakage
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Never let this guy cook because he almost burnt the whole Multiverse with this s*** Dog water webnovel story this is a literal cringe Fest he was an orphan kid then died and reincarnated as a rich kid but his parents died and acts like the most intense emo kid oh my God I just hate the world and I like the color red so much like we get it okay this is why the parents from his first life abandoned him. 🗣🗣🔥🔥

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GalahadAlter
GalahadAlterLv4

it's good ..............................

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LaziestMan
LaziestManLv4

hello everyone if you like Chat Group fanfiction then go read douluo with multiverse Villain ChatGroup

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Marilyn_Sanchez_2063
Marilyn_Sanchez_2063Lv1

This is a op character done wrong he has no personality and no flavor this story is shallow equally in the depths of a garbage can I can just say this is just disappointing. 😔

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Santy_Melay
Santy_MelayLv1

Basically it is giving power to someone who does not use it well; He's too cautious, that is, why do you have that power if you're just going to hide, because it's not an unknown world for him; I clarify that I only read a little more than 10 chapters. He also out there asks stupid questions which are easy to answer.

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LXVE_MuRdxR69
LXVE_MuRdxR69Lv13

Alright after reading quite a handful of chapters I now know what's up with this.Overlord and Tensura aren't probably but CERTAINLY my favorite animes, however to my disappointment it wasn't that greatly portrayed.. Lemme explain ; I didn't feel 'that' element that made it look like a true overlord fic, Author tried amalgamating the two universes but to a point where we can't know where's where and what's what.I couldn't comprehend a few dozen chapters and it felt like reading a void of words. While a few chapters were filled with explanations we really didn't need.I'm sorry i didn't like this fic but u think the author shouldn't feel discouraged, on the contrary he must work harder and accept criticism for the better. [img=update][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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