Review Detail of Pewpewcachoo in Marvel-ous Ninjutsu
Review detail
So I will use this to answer any questions people ask me about, like "Y NO HAREM?" Sorry, but I did state I was writing a story I would want to read. Most harem stories just don't make any sense and would never actually work if you think about it for more then a few minutes. I think I have only read one story out of 100+ that had a small harem that actually made sense and worked well for the story. I didn't think I could pull that off as a writer, so if I decide to make one, it won't be for the MC because I would have to actually make it believable for myself and I don't think my writing chops are that great. I will write reply's to this when I get other questions I feel need to be answered. Or you could even ask here and I might reply if it is something I feel people should know about.
Marvel-ous Ninjutsu
Pewpewcachoo
Liked by 33 people
LIKEReplies26
how about two partners? no more no less, simply two, preferably scarlet witch or hela as they both can end the universe and also probably the only characters which I haven't seen cheat lol, I am mostly suggesting them for thier battle prowess though as I believe that way the mc doesn't have to worry too much about his beloved being in danger constantly and you would have a "reasonable" love interest, although I am alright with a single love interest anyways I just hope you don't introduced too many people who somehow fell in love with him and in the end he chooses only one among them as I usually prefer multiple partners or harem fanfics mainly because I dislike and feel uncomfortable when the mc rejects someone's genuine love for him and because of the flex "look at the mc he has more than a single partner" idk that's just me, let me know what you think author
that's why you gotta write characters that don't act one dimensionally? if the only personality the characters have is either "angry" "shy" or "cold" and they either fall in love in 5 seconds, that's just bad writing.
Rillik:how about two partners? no more no less, simply two, preferably scarlet witch or hela as they both can end the universe and also probably the only characters which I haven't seen cheat lol, I am mostly suggesting them for thier battle prowess though as I believe that way the mc doesn't have to worry too much about his beloved being in danger constantly and you would have a "reasonable" love interest, although I am alright with a single love interest anyways I just hope you don't introduced too many people who somehow fell in love with him and in the end he chooses only one among them as I usually prefer multiple partners or harem fanfics mainly because I dislike and feel uncomfortable when the mc rejects someone's genuine love for him and because of the flex "look at the mc he has more than a single partner" idk that's just me, let me know what you think author
Rillik:how about two partners? no more no less, simply two, preferably scarlet witch or hela as they both can end the universe and also probably the only characters which I haven't seen cheat lol, I am mostly suggesting them for thier battle prowess though as I believe that way the mc doesn't have to worry too much about his beloved being in danger constantly and you would have a "reasonable" love interest, although I am alright with a single love interest anyways I just hope you don't introduced too many people who somehow fell in love with him and in the end he chooses only one among them as I usually prefer multiple partners or harem fanfics mainly because I dislike and feel uncomfortable when the mc rejects someone's genuine love for him and because of the flex "look at the mc he has more than a single partner" idk that's just me, let me know what you think author
I never had another review... I did reply to someone else's comment/review about a harem. If I did make a harem, I could possibly make it believable for someone not the MC mostly because I wouldn't have to flesh it out as much as if I was writing it for the MC. That is the only reason I would even think about it/try it. But I honestly don't have any plans to write any type of romance in the story as of yet.
FinnsRevenge:Oh you deleted your other review, I'll just post a ss of my reply in regards to your previous comment about a side character with a haremimage
Pewpewcachoo:I never had another review... I did reply to someone else's comment/review about a harem. If I did make a harem, I could possibly make it believable for someone not the MC mostly because I wouldn't have to flesh it out as much as if I was writing it for the MC. That is the only reason I would even think about it/try it. But I honestly don't have any plans to write any type of romance in the story as of yet.
FinnsRevenge:Oh you're right, my mistake, I thought it was your review thread we were talking in
Yea I don’t see the need to write about a harem if it’s not the mc, it would just be uninteresting. The only time I would except a harem to work or make sense is if the culture and the morals made it normal, a diffrent race from a another planet for example. Hope the mc has some sort of love life because it seems like our man didn’t even look at a women not to mention talk in his first life which is really sad btw.
Pewpewcachoo:I never had another review... I did reply to someone else's comment/review about a harem. If I did make a harem, I could possibly make it believable for someone not the MC mostly because I wouldn't have to flesh it out as much as if I was writing it for the MC. That is the only reason I would even think about it/try it. But I honestly don't have any plans to write any type of romance in the story as of yet.
The funny thing is you kinda already made him popular with a lot of the young girl super heros and when he shows his real self to them in the future and notice he’s close to their age, it could have an effect of them falling for him when they are all older. I’m not saying make a harem, I’m just saying you already set him on a path of popularity with a lot of little girl heros that are closer to his real bodies age.
Pewpewcachoo:I never had another review... I did reply to someone else's comment/review about a harem. If I did make a harem, I could possibly make it believable for someone not the MC mostly because I wouldn't have to flesh it out as much as if I was writing it for the MC. That is the only reason I would even think about it/try it. But I honestly don't have any plans to write any type of romance in the story as of yet.
please don't listen to him, only one is enough!Join our no-harem sect! more than one is a no go for me! so will there be more than one wife for the mc ? I need to know before I start
Pewpewcachoo:Maybe, we will see.
Ashborn1609:please don't listen to him, only one is enough!Join our no-harem sect! more than one is a no go for me! so will there be more than one wife for the mc ? I need to know before I start
Do not listen to those perverts. The only reason I'm interested in your novel is because there are no Harem and Romance tags. Anticipating this to be a great read.
Pewpewcachoo:I have no real plan for romance for the MC at this stage.
Mister_Robot:Do not listen to those perverts. The only reason I'm interested in your novel is because there are no Harem and Romance tags. Anticipating this to be a great read.
