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Zekril22dCommentedwaiting to read it soon goodluck
I wish you all the best and we'll interact once more…- Zekril24dCommentedCh 85 Chapter 85: The End
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How many of you are still reading this fanfiction? Type, +1. Can I get 100 comments? Who knows? - Zekril26dCommentedCh 88 Chapter 77: Breach Of The Mind
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- Zekril26dReplied to TenseiNovels
the MC has too much positive energy. I mean, he always see the bright side of people around him. Like how he see it's not almighty fault or how he wants to see his bakugo relationship moving forward. He is too "optimistic" if I'm not wrong on my understanding. Why don't you highlight a sin trait on him to make him more human. Like showing greed for power, lust for woman, envy for the strong, or even just being slothful just to show that he is not just a written character that followed a script written. I hope you see this.
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It's good, but it is written by following a formula. It's too predictable that it gets boring the far you read it. Why don't you give some spice on it, like give your MC some attitude or stop describing the character in depth but just the broad idea on who he is. It's just a suggestion. I hope you will not get upset with what I said. Like I said It's good but needs just some spice on it.
- Zekril28dReplied to SAGE_of_ORIGIN
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he will become the "Dragon Warrior"
"Heheheheheheehe, I will have a kung fu panda of my own," - Zekril1mthCommentedIf you're reading this at post, you'll have about 39 Chapters to get through, each around 5kish words long. Not counting the interludes, or interlewds.
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MTL hayz thanks
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PERRYYY!!
5. Fedora From A Certain Platypus (P&F) (When Worn May Cause Theme Music To Play) - Zekril1mthReplied to blazukiCh 32 Chapter 32
- Zekril1mthCommentedCh 32 Chapter 32
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why don't you read a novel or watch stories to get ideas on how the your story could work.
Honestly and sincerely, if anyone had any advice for how to get out of this slump or writer's block, if that's what this is, then I'd really appreciate it if you gave me some advice. I tried taking a break from writing but it didn't work, this is my favorite thing to do after all. - Zekril2mthReplied to AlmightySkyDxddy
I think author-san don't get it?
Anything to be honest, it's a wish fulfilment, bust a nut if you want. After all, it's just fantasy...smirk. - Zekril2mthReplied to KsoGhost
yhe I just thought at that that she's base from Mei but just read it it's Ei
Once it's finished there is a bright light, and standing in Raiden's place is a beautiful nude woman, actually now that I look at her she looks exactly like Raiden Shogun.