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Unfortunately, although the author has done well in terms of readability, it comes off a little boring and childish, I was hard pushed getting to chapter 16. Also, I know this may seam a little biased but I also hated Oscar in the orignal, it put me off when he was added, especially when I know what will happen. Eventually if he stays for the long run, we will get wasted chapters of his life and love story and in all honesty, I couldn’t care less of side characters. I also think the blooming relationship between MC and Yin is a little early, there 6 for crying out loud. Anyway, all the best Author, hope it all works out 👍🏻.

A very good fanfic the story is well developed and readable the writing the characters are developed correctly. The dialogues are well arranged and funny

This story is crack wish fulfillment so if your looking for a well thought out story don't read this if you just want something you don't need to think or understand then this is the story for you.

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Although it is the first story of this author, it is not so bad, so far it looks interesting and is improving over time, in addition to being constant when he uploads chapters, I really liked how it develops at the moment

This story is a disappointment.This story is a disappointment.

Although the story is not perfect, things like grammar and others are improving little by little, at least it is much more understandable than other stories I have read. I'm liking it a lot, I hope you continue like this author, since I see a great future for your story.

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