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Louriem_9876Lv12yr
2023-04-17 10:51

Although the story is not perfect, things like grammar and others are improving little by little, at least it is much more understandable than other stories I have read. I'm liking it a lot, I hope you continue like this author, since I see a great future for your story.

doulou dalu:ten thousand worlds anime system

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