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2023-04-17 10:17

OK so I’ve read what 15-16 chapters and I hate this so far I haven’t seen anything that’s really new, except for a OC reincarnate who is existence doesn’t really push the story along at all not to mention that the main character has the exact same weakness as the original how anyone thought that was a good idea I have no idea, but putting all of that aside the story itself is written in a very messy manner and it doesn’t clearly define anything especially when it has to do with the main characters abilities in the beginning windows abilities are first introduced. They do not receive a proper explanation. It’s more like they’re mentioned in passing and it doesn’t really explain what they do until he starts to use it and you can kind of piece together parts of what it’s supposed to be which is just horrible and then there’s the main characters personality, which is the very definition of trash pathetic I mean, he suffers years of neglect and abuse, and doesn’t receive any growth as a character. In fact, he’s the same as he was when he was born, which is another stupid part if you’re not gonna give him any memories or any abilities from his previous life don’t make him a reincarnated person and I guess you could say that the extra abilities he does have the ones that aren’t explain properly or what he gained from his reincarnation which they are, but they are not from his past life, which again just means you could’ve just had him be born with the exact same advantages because there’s literally no difference Anyway, I left this big of a review because I genuinely don’t understand why this story has such a high rating and his reviews I mean it’s not absolutely completely terrible, but it is nowhere near good and then there are those who do leave mediocre reviews even say that they are dropping it but still leave four or five star reviews

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Sky_Demon_Order
Sky_Demon_OrderAuthor

It starts to pick the pace up from the 16 chapter there character development and if you read my introduction you would know his memory is fragmentized and forgotten, so please read first then judge.there is also no reincarnetion tag so hah.

Sky_Demon_Order
Sky_Demon_OrderAuthor

There is no reincarnetion tag, read also the summary.

CloudSmoke
CloudSmokeLv5

Sora isn’t reincarnated then? Because I’m pretty sure she is

Sky_Demon_Order:There is no reincarnetion tag, read also the summary.
Sky_Demon_Order
Sky_Demon_OrderAuthor

Thanks for comment, I appreciate your support.

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Sky_Demon_Order
Sky_Demon_OrderAuthor

Thanks for pointing out the incostincencies, answering your question, tags for me are meant to describe the protagonist nature.

CloudSmoke:Sora isn’t reincarnated then? Because I’m pretty sure she is
Sky_Demon_Order
Sky_Demon_OrderAuthor

So you mean you didn't understand his powers, abilities and skills? Okay thanks for clearing up the confusion.

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