The author has only published 8 chapters for now... I can't judge the writing because i use google translate to read... Updates: quite frequent for now... Story development: a bit slow... Character design: interesting enough even if I couldn't figure out what Teachings I received from the Hindu God... Background of the world: I've been waiting for a long time for a fan-fiction that talks about rakudai kishi no cavalry. ps. (I write with Google translator).

It is well written but the mc has a frustrating attitude. Why is there a reincarnation tag? He still craves the love and attention of these animals even after the hurtful things they did to him, I honestly cannot stand reading this any longer.

OK so I’ve read what 15-16 chapters and I hate this so far I haven’t seen anything that’s really new, except for a OC reincarnate who is existence doesn’t really push the story along at all not to mention that the main character has the exact same weakness as the original how anyone thought that was a good idea I have no idea, but putting all of that aside the story itself is written in a very messy manner and it doesn’t clearly define anything especially when it has to do with the main characters abilities in the beginning windows abilities are first introduced. They do not receive a proper explanation. It’s more like they’re mentioned in passing and it doesn’t really explain what they do until he starts to use it and you can kind of piece together parts of what it’s supposed to be which is just horrible and then there’s the main characters personality, which is the very definition of trash pathetic I mean, he suffers years of neglect and abuse, and doesn’t receive any growth as a character. In fact, he’s the same as he was when he was born, which is another stupid part if you’re not gonna give him any memories or any abilities from his previous life don’t make him a reincarnated person and I guess you could say that the extra abilities he does have the ones that aren’t explain properly or what he gained from his reincarnation which they are, but they are not from his past life, which again just means you could’ve just had him be born with the exact same advantages because there’s literally no difference Anyway, I left this big of a review because I genuinely don’t understand why this story has such a high rating and his reviews I mean it’s not absolutely completely terrible, but it is nowhere near good and then there are those who do leave mediocre reviews even say that they are dropping it but still leave four or five star reviews

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