I like the character very much... although i am bit confused about that vivraniam or something as i didn't played hp game but overall novel is good.
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LIKEIt ok bro, i will try...well if you also don't mind me, i also have a little wish...can you try to write a novel about wizarding world.. not just about school but broad magical world of HP. Just set character to a person who recently graduated and exploring various communities of wizards. I am sure it will be a nice project for everyone...you can take some inspiration from fantastic beasts movies...
SrCuervo:Hello, I know this is a rude way to make my hp novel reach more people, but it would help me if you read my novel: "Harry Potter: Narnia and the World Hidden in a Closet" You can find the novel in my profile, thank you and I apologize.