I love the inheritance cycle so any fanfic of it is appreciated. The story is decent. a bit rushed in the beginning. A lot of liberties taken with this story in terms of character personalities. The only bad part to me tho is that MC looks down on everyone for just asking questions. questions that would be reasonable if you didn't have memories of the story. He makes it a point to show is dominance to every male we've met so far in some way or another. You just gotta roll your eyes at it and move on. other than that, the story is good. decent grammar. unique and cool ideas with going about this expanded world hes created. id say give it a chance.
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LIKEThx. would be VERY boring if EVERY MC was the same. And personally, I believe, this is accurate for a reincarnator, be honest, would you act differently if it were you? Actually think about it. Maybe you would be a great teacher, I wouldn't. So that's why he acts the way he does, because I can put myself in that place.