The story is interesting and then it's ruined. We get a whole arc of MC building Huge Bunker/Robots/Etc and then he goes and joins the 100 cause he's a fanboy..... The Entire start of Fic was fkin irrelevant except for MC creating he's own Waifu that's it. The Fic would have been much better if MC was reborn on the Ark and was sent down with everyone else. He feels like those Cringy fanboys who want to gobble the main cast all over.
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I totally agree, I thought the story was going to be about him taking over the world before the 100 arrive, not staying hidden and then joining the 100, who are just a bunch of stupid teenagers with mental problems.
who would want to read a hundred fanfic without the hundred... °ω°?
It’s not that it’s that you had I’m joining them when he was Independent. Who wants to read it how you wrote it? Very few especially when you started attacking people criticizing and pointing out stuff it’s why this comment may seem so nasty
It's called logic, the fic isn't even 30 chapters in. It stands to reason that ANYONE who was an avid fan of the show and actually got to their world would want to meet them, criticizing that is just stupid. Especially since the storyline revolves around them. It's what he does afterwards that counts.
That is not logic anyone from what you have read would think that he would be his own superpower before the dance of politics and war that will happen. Instead you go against your own story’s premis that he would prepare what he could also do on the arc down on earth all that time in advance look at the comics they all say the same thing not just me. You know an author is terrible when this is his response to criticism when he ruins his own fic and wonders why people are criticizing it when it doesn’t have what they want or expected
No one will read 30 chapters if the first 5-10 aren’t great and what they want as past that point it’s just a waste.
