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APARIMIT_SHUKLALv18mth
2024-05-25 16:56

Very much satisfied with the story I think this novel is really good for you first novel. As for the story , it is good , story is good and has a lot of potential and as of now author is doing a very good job at it As for the mc , he is likable character and has good character development throughout the story , side charectors are good ( mainly male side charectors as female side charectors are not that developed but still relevant), Also mc has a broken plot armour but you should not have a problem with it beacuse this shameless author was always specific about it so it will not come as a surprise and it doesn't affect the story at all also this point is also a point of comedy in the story😂 As for the romance fl is introduced a little late in the story, and the romance is a little slow but it is still developing at a good rate plus fl personality is very good for me So yeah these were my views about this story and I think you should give this a try

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Lucifer_TheOrignal
Lucifer_TheOrignalLv4

bro does he have a discord if he does give me tha link

NAMELESS_UN_KNOWN
NAMELESS_UN_KNOWNLv4

harem?

Khinkhin_OoLv3

no

NAMELESS_UN_KNOWN:harem?
smitten_oakleyLv11

wasnt gonna read this but no harem sign me up ill give it a go

Khinkhin_Oo:no
Khinkhin_OoLv3

If you were to read,I would like to say is don't judge it with first a few chapters. It kept getting better and better. Anyway,have a good read.👍

smitten_oakley:wasnt gonna read this but no harem sign me up ill give it a go
Chris_Cummings_5379Lv1

Well this is obviously a paid review and you haven't actually read this. None of what you said applies to this story. The MC is not a likeable person. He is an idiot and is oblivious to the fact that he is an idiot. The MC isn't even the MC. The MC is more of a sidekick. Alec is the real MC. You're an idiot.

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