Hi everyone! This is 'Orange' and its my very first time writing a Novel and I am hoping to learn a lot in this long Journey.. In this story there no raincarnation, the mc have only one single life 🤣 which he love a lot Ahem.. I means the mc is weak but he just happened to have a high luck giving him opportunities to become strong. You will also see a second mc who have system so many #cheat codes 🙄. If you have any questions you can ask me by replying on this review..

Awesome book! I highly recommend cos it really captures the essence of the MC with a really nice character design. Author-sama, pls do not drop this novel. Love it 😍😍😍

I didn’t have many expectations for this at first, but it’s a lot better then I was expecting like the author says though it is a little slow at first but then gets really good fast. Definitely recommend.

It's very nice bro and just don't make it a harem

للأن كل شيء جميل في القصه قرأت لأخر فصل الآن ألا و هوا الفصل 473 احداث كثيره حصلت مع كل الحماس إلا انه احس انه القصه الآن بدأت مع توسع الكاتب في العالم و درجات القوه و شرح بعض المسطلحات الجديده في القصه. Eng: For now, everything is beautiful in the story. I read to the last chapter now, chapter 473. Many events happened with all enthusiasm, but I feel that the story began now with the writer's expansion in the world and the degrees of strength and the explanation of some new terms in the story.

Very much satisfied with the story I think this novel is really good for you first novel. As for the story , it is good , story is good and has a lot of potential and as of now author is doing a very good job at it As for the mc , he is likable character and has good character development throughout the story , side charectors are good ( mainly male side charectors as female side charectors are not that developed but still relevant), Also mc has a broken plot armour but you should not have a problem with it beacuse this shameless author was always specific about it so it will not come as a surprise and it doesn't affect the story at all also this point is also a point of comedy in the story😂 As for the romance fl is introduced a little late in the story, and the romance is a little slow but it is still developing at a good rate plus fl personality is very good for me So yeah these were my views about this story and I think you should give this a try

I gave it a shot and read 100 chapters because the author said the protagonist is OP and doesn't hide his powers much. Well, that was a lie. The protagonist is weak and stupid. Let alone being OP, he's not even the top of his class. He's also very lazy. He's described as someone more mature than his age would indicate, which is 16, but he acts like a 12 year old, so that's also a lie. As for pacing... after 100 chapters, I feel like the novel hasn't even started yet. He has gone to school, been insulted the whole time for being trash, which is true, and now he's playing around in some random tower to find some healing elixir. So I'd say it's snail pace. Veeeeery slow.

I’m really enjoying the book. Slow beginning and then turn out very addictive. **spoiler: would be interesting to see bloodline versus system progression.

Ah, so far, the book is alright; the writing is fine, the story is developing, but slowly, the character designs are alright, and the main character is just a normal smart boy with potential (who knows, maybe he'll get better later). It is advised for readers with a lot of patience, but even though it seems unexceptional, this book has a lot of potential if there is character development.