Item: Arifureta: Dark Lord
Rating: 1
Author: Javi_Quevedo

Javi_QuevedoLv121yr

2023-07-27 02:12

Reseña de un español: Bueno, para empezar súper decepcionado. Estuve leyendo la historia antes de que hiciera el reinicio, leí la historia después del reinicio, he terminado de leer la historia. Tenía buena pinta, era una historia decente, pero el constante desdén del autor por los lectores, las pausas enormes sin avisar y el hecho de que decida dejar la historia apenas llegando a los 30 episodios, ha echo que esta lectura sea sólo una pérdida de tiempo. Si me hubiera visto de nuevo el anime de arifureta, que es basura en comparación a la novela, habría aprovechado mejor mi tiempo. No aporta NADA nuevo esta historia es casi un copia pega del original cambiando el nombre del prota y dándole dos habilidades diferentes. Una auténtica decepción, esta historia brilla por su idea, no por el autor.

Arifureta: Dark Lord

Eros_Lord

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Eros_LordAuthor

¿Cuándo he expresado desdén por los lectores?

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