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Eros_Lord
Eros_LordAuthor1yr
2023-04-05 00:19

Author’s Shameless Review! This is my first time writing so I hope you can be lenient when giving reviews. If I make any major mistakes such as illogical plot and the like, please comment here so I can improve on mistakes. Thanks!

Arifureta: Dark Lord

Eros_Lord
4.3
36 Chs

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BlankVoid26God
BlankVoid26GodLv4

nice work author, keep up the good work

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Eros_Lord
Eros_LordAuthor

Thanks for the support!

BlankVoid26God:nice work author, keep up the good work
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Sathiya_Fonsi
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1yr
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The_Dark_Hydrax
The_Dark_HydraxLv4

More chapters please if it's not too much trouble.

1yr
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Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4

Hey i want to know. Since i read your HOTD story i would like to support this one to. So.? who will be in his Harem.? You did not put potential Love Interests so i would like to know. And do MC will replace Nagumo Hajime.? will he be bullied to.?

Eros_Lord:Thanks for the support!
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Intresting~🙃 ...............................

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CaveSquirrel
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Let's start this.First of all, your writing quality is good, the world background is decent, the updating stability is nice.And then we get to the character design. MC was a good character through and through until the latest chapters (25 to current). Your MC became worser than Hajime, might be better to compare him to a ded dove on the streets.He becomes a bad edge Lord.

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I don't know how to rate this ff. It's plot, updates and charater design are good but the way you describe the story just frustrates me for example: At some point it looks like you know alot about the OG but at some point you miss to add the basic details of the story purposely or not. At some points you give to many details that it looks like it's a slow burn ff but at some point you don't even mention the most basic things happeing in the story and rush past all of them mostly in his leveling up arc currently ongoing in the abss.

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Great story .................................................................................................................................

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LutfiOii
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Nice story so far, I hope the author does an update as soon as possible. Well, hoping that mc won't have a harem and just take shizuku as his love interest.

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X1AutumnLeaf
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has potential, can't wait for the author to get healthy and continue

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Sauce_For_Life
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Love it~❤️. You should make a Pokémon fanfic! Or Blue Lock! There aren’t many of those and the ones that are here in WebNovel are discontinued.

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