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CaveSquirrel
CaveSquirrelLv41yr
2023-07-09 19:58

Let's start this.First of all, your writing quality is good, the world background is decent, the updating stability is nice.And then we get to the character design. MC was a good character through and through until the latest chapters (25 to current). Your MC became worser than Hajime, might be better to compare him to a ded dove on the streets.He becomes a bad edge Lord.

Arifureta: Dark Lord

Eros_Lord
4.3
36 Chs

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Depraved_Chap
Depraved_ChapLv13

That’s harsh. I’ve read a bit of your Arifureta fic btw. Is the teacher’s personality on the [Neutral Good] Spectrum?

1yr
CaveSquirrel
CaveSquirrelLv4

Yes

Depraved_Chap:That’s harsh. I’ve read a bit of your Arifureta fic btw. Is the teacher’s personality on the [Neutral Good] Spectrum?
1yr
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Author’s Shameless Review! This is my first time writing so I hope you can be lenient when giving reviews. If I make any major mistakes such as illogical plot and the like, please comment here so I can improve on mistakes. Thanks!

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Magus_Of_Flower
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Intresting~🙃 ...............................

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please_be_gentle_
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I don't know how to rate this ff. It's plot, updates and charater design are good but the way you describe the story just frustrates me for example: At some point it looks like you know alot about the OG but at some point you miss to add the basic details of the story purposely or not. At some points you give to many details that it looks like it's a slow burn ff but at some point you don't even mention the most basic things happeing in the story and rush past all of them mostly in his leveling up arc currently ongoing in the abss.

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ArdaPendragon
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Great story .................................................................................................................................

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Lector567
Lector567Lv1

Buena histurio , si ases otra historia voto por tate no yuusha , [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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LutfiOii
LutfiOiiLv2

Nice story so far, I hope the author does an update as soon as possible. Well, hoping that mc won't have a harem and just take shizuku as his love interest.

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X1AutumnLeaf
X1AutumnLeafLv13

has potential, can't wait for the author to get healthy and continue

1yr
Sauce_For_Life
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Love it~❤️. You should make a Pokémon fanfic! Or Blue Lock! There aren’t many of those and the ones that are here in WebNovel are discontinued.

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