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Kaizel_
Kaizel_Lv11yr
2023-04-19 23:14

MC: "my system gives me things if I travel to other islands... what do I do? I spend months on the same island" Honestly, the moment he joined the navy was the moment when the story went downhill for me, not least because it was forbidden to teach rokushiki to the MC....

One piece : voyager

0_Eclipse_0
4.3
67 Chs

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0_Eclipse_0
0_Eclipse_0Author

Bro I get what you are saying but in my opinion he at least needs to solidify what he has got up to now to use it better and I prefer a little slow burn so that he can fight others when travelling to other islands. So I hope you give it some time

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Emibm2468
Emibm2468Lv4

I agree 100% and he can't just travel evywhere he wants whenever he wants if he is weak because he could find someone stronger than him and die. Also having a variety of powers but not training to make them very powerful would be very bad because if it is noticed by the WG he would most likely be kidnapped and brainwashed to turn him into a CP agent or something like that.

0_Eclipse_0:Bro I get what you are saying but in my opinion he at least needs to solidify what he has got up to now to use it better and I prefer a little slow burn so that he can fight others when travelling to other islands. So I hope you give it some time
1yr
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DaoistyQNGiX
DaoistyQNGiXLv14

Ah didn’t know that he joined the marines lol thank you for the heads up! I won’t be reading this then because I agree that it makes no sense.

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DaoistyQNGiX
DaoistyQNGiXLv14

East Blue is weak and he 100% can just travel

Emibm2468:I agree 100% and he can't just travel evywhere he wants whenever he wants if he is weak because he could find someone stronger than him and die. Also having a variety of powers but not training to make them very powerful would be very bad because if it is noticed by the WG he would most likely be kidnapped and brainwashed to turn him into a CP agent or something like that.
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0_Eclipse_0
0_Eclipse_0Author

bro he took an opportunity at that time but he won't be in the marine. well as of the latest chapter he already left the Marines. so i hope you give this fic a try.

DaoistyQNGiX:Ah didn’t know that he joined the marines lol thank you for the heads up! I won’t be reading this then because I agree that it makes no sense.
10mth
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0_Eclipse_0
0_Eclipse_0Author

And since it's weak it won't get good rewards too so isn't it better if he focuses on strengthening first.

DaoistyQNGiX:East Blue is weak and he 100% can just travel
10mth
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Daoist4MxvaV
Daoist4MxvaVLv13

it's that attitude that will get u killed

DaoistyQNGiX:East Blue is weak and he 100% can just travel
10mth
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