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TruthHurtsX1000Lv22yr
2023-03-01 22:08

As of chapter 39 mc is only 10 yrs old and quit powerful. Its dumb af to me. Should have time skipped long time ago. Ig if you like child mc that strong af then go ahead. I find it super boring to have child mc. It ruins whole thing

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well you can say i like slow pacing ........ in my opinion it help in making the foundation for the later part and I want to establish a good power ranking so I'm quite.......... But it looks like I'm not quite good at it😅😅

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TruthHurtsX1000Lv2

Maybe its me but when it take that many chapters and no time has really passed amd he as strong as he is it just ruins it for me. By time plot or anything happen he be op af and growing be chore or boring interactions and battles

0_Eclipse_0:well you can say i like slow pacing ........ in my opinion it help in making the foundation for the later part and I want to establish a good power ranking so I'm quite.......... But it looks like I'm not quite good at it😅😅
0_Eclipse_0
0_Eclipse_0Author

hehe i guess I'm not that good at it😅😅😅

TruthHurtsX1000:Maybe its me but when it take that many chapters and no time has really passed amd he as strong as he is it just ruins it for me. By time plot or anything happen he be op af and growing be chore or boring interactions and battles
TruthHurtsX1000
TruthHurtsX1000Lv2

Its all good. Pacing and power scale is hard tbh. Its easy to mess up. Why it best for actual growth or systems to start later on in age instead of child because it easily leads to op lol. Alot will enjoy it tho so no problem. Its mostly my preference

0_Eclipse_0:hehe i guess I'm not that good at it😅😅😅
0_Eclipse_0
0_Eclipse_0Author

well still I can guarantee that his powers won't be illogical..........so u can give it a try

TruthHurtsX1000:Its all good. Pacing and power scale is hard tbh. Its easy to mess up. Why it best for actual growth or systems to start later on in age instead of child because it easily leads to op lol. Alot will enjoy it tho so no problem. Its mostly my preference
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