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Gwiber
GwiberLv142yr
2023-03-10 09:30

I love the interaction between the mc and the other characters, the story feels alive

Fate/Disturbance

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4.8
65 Chs

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ArdaPendragon
ArdaPendragonLv4

There are only two chapters, but the story so far is great.I'm glad it's not a harem.I hope you can write more chapters..............I may update this post after reading more chapters.

2yr

NotSoBigShlong
NotSoBigShlongLv14

Definitely what I’v wanted to see from a Fate fanfic. None of the annoying reborn as a dumb magus and being an edge-lord infront of Gilgamesh and gathering a platoon of women servants for no reason at all ((we know the one I’m on about) though the women problem is still potentially there, hope to God it won’t) The writing is really good and doesn’t skip details to move on to what the author is trying to speed on to. They definitely use their words wisely, not wasting a paragraph to fill space. Super expectant for this one because it’s tthe type of fate book I’ve een waiting for. A Servant MC. Also, I hope the author doesn’t decide to make a mess of there being multiple of him in different timelines. Just do it. Don’t do the, ”there’s only one of you in all of time” rubbish. It’s not like he’s gonna cause any harm to anything; from what I have seen the MC is a righteous character who has a sense of right and wrong. Even if he goes through with what Astoria thought is a morally wrong situation, he also thinks that, proving he isn’t a mindless drone.

2yr
Merlin58
Merlin58Lv2

Great story, but there are very few chapters at the moment----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

2yr
Godlancelot
GodlancelotLv4

Another fate fanfic Hope the author doesn't drop this or else..,.................... ..........................................................,................................

2yr
Kingu_Lugal
Kingu_LugalLv12

This is amazing! Aston is a well-written character that feels real. Though I am curious if Aston will end up with Artoria. I hope so, at least I hope they are not enemies. Also, what is the update schedule gonna look like?

2yr
Feniurme
FeniurmeLv4

An incredible read with a premise that got my attention instantaneously. I hope you have a good day author because you have certainly made mine brighter with your enjoyable story.

2yr
VoidPriestess
VoidPriestessLv14

the problem I have with a lot of FF is that they feel empty yet this FF feels alive, making me feel as I'm there experiencing whats happening in person.

2yr
4rthr77
4rthr77Lv2

finally a good non-harem fic with character development and a ship LETS F GO!!!

2yr
wisdomseeker
wisdomseekerLv14

Only few chapters yet already top 10 Wow 😳

2yr
Sir_Frog
Sir_FrogLv1

The story is very well written, considering that it is a Fate story. The MC, Aston, is a complex, yet simple main character. You understand his reason for doing things. He's powerfull, but not OP.

2yr
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