The first 3 chapters were very interesting, I hope that the symbiote is developed to its maximum capacity, I remember that Venom was even able to create universes with his body. obviously I don't need the MC to create universes, as long as he's strong I'm satisfied :D

The mc is extremely unpleasant in every way, he is extremely cruel and indifferent in addition to the fact that his victims are always men and they sexually abuse all the female characters presented, not to mention the fact that he had a girlfriend before his death and he doesn't even hesitate to go after other women The female characters are poorly written, the MC simply enters the female character's body, sexually abuses and feigns innocence and they easily accept their existence outside that all other characters are just word fillers Future development is clearly predictable from the opening chapters The world is also weird, he just sees a meltdown of reality the moment he arrives on the planet and there's no reaction about it either from the MC or the other characters.

Brudda is literally black goo, has the most common name in fanfics, has a system and this is somehow a harem story. I’ll pass.

The description said it wouldn't be all smex. That's all it's been so far. 70% of it is just blatant pron. otherwise it's okay, but the world is undeveloped and barely described, the writing quality is mediocre at best, and the characters are shallow as a puddle in the desert. It's a cool premise, but poor execution.

symbiotic mc? hope it's like predatory in qq that was awesome, but based on your other story should be awesome, so here 5 star

1/ the mc a rapist with no morals 2: the females are tra rate like they have no brains. 3: it a basic haram story which the mc get everything he wants no matter what

Story of a symbiote with a depraved human mind, going after every woman he can, I can't think of anything better hehehe.....................

This is a popularity review. I loved his rent-a-girlfriend Fanfiction so I have high hopes for this one. ................................... I'll take it down once we have 15thousand words 😋

Reveal spoiler

Very interesting, well written, I like that the MC is a symbiote who needs a host and has a system. It's much more interesting for a symbiote to grow powerful than a human, especially when he has access to the hive mind and can split off pieces of himself.