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timeawayfromstress
timeawayfromstressLv12yr
2023-03-21 07:47

The first chapters may seem good, but then the novel becomes garbage. mc has no brain, mc acts with emotions, mc has no logic. everyone's iq drops.

Infinite Evolution: A spy in multiverse

_Crimson_
4.8
94 Chs

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MorningWood_Dao
MorningWood_DaoLv5

so, a novel with stupid mc syndrome?

1yr
timeawayfromstress
timeawayfromstressLv1

Yes

MorningWood_Dao:so, a novel with stupid mc syndrome?
1yr
_Crimson_
_Crimson_Author

i don't know what type of sick fun you people get from making fake reviews. is it because you can't write on your own that your little pitiful vanity can only be kindled by doing these petty tricks to other people who are just trying to do their best? or you are just that lacking in the brain department and is actually a retard? I am really curious.

1yr
4
_Crimson_
_Crimson_Author

it is not like that my friend, this guy is just a fake reviewer, you can give it a try, if you find even one of the things this fake reviewer said in my book then I will apologize to you personally and even mention it in the latest chapter.

MorningWood_Dao:so, a novel with stupid mc syndrome?
1yr
4
TaoistOfFreedom_
TaoistOfFreedom_Lv2

this review is false, the mc is still very smart and I almost never saw him act with emotions

1yr
Enlightened_Clown
Enlightened_ClownLv4

so he is emotionless husk?

TaoistOfFreedom_:this review is false, the mc is still very smart and I almost never saw him act with emotions
1yr
TaoistOfFreedom_
TaoistOfFreedom_Lv2

Depending on the situation, Tipo still develops friendships and relationships but in risky situations he tends to act rationally

Enlightened_Clown:so he is emotionless husk?
1yr
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_Crimson_
_Crimson_Author

Hello Self reviewing author here 馃ゴ This is actually my second time writing a fanfiction on Ultimate Evolution, i really love Ultimate Evolution tbh it's perfect and i really wanted to write a wish ful filling fanfic about it so i did. I am still an amateur writer and don't know much about writing so i really welcome all advice and tips in comments. I am all open for suggestions regarding future plot, character development and other things. well that's all.

2yr

Johan_The_Monster
Johan_The_MonsterLv2

author deletes reviews, my negative review was deleted and I'm pretty sure so we're others.

2yr
Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

Didn't read original. Being a Chinese hater, or something like this. But i quite enjoy this. But, well yeah. I quite dislike this nigthmare realm system - I mean, when you look on hardened- reduce you damage by 30(or was giving plus hp, don't care anyway). It's does look stupid and makes you wonder how this even supposed to work... But that's a minor point. Like mc gets better, somehow, and that's all that matter, right? Somewhat. The other thing, is trying to be nice to girls sometimes. I can't blame them for acting stupid - they have right to do so. And i can't blame mc for being too soft. He have enough breath room to be a gentleman and talk about eternal love with first beautiful girl that care about his well-being... And second one. Okay, it's cringe. More so, if he wasn't so overpowered, I would beach slap both of them for wasting his time. In his shoes. Like beach, there is a literal war machine that wants your head and my too, and you take you time to sniff around and be salty? Is this all you care for?馃憖馃憖馃憖馃敧

2yr
Lord_Disaster
Lord_DisasterLv4

Very good story, I hope you don't abandon it. I would like that when the worlds of the original story are over, you vote for the next worlds that I can go to, but apart other than that everything else is fine

2yr
please_be_gentle_
please_be_gentle_Lv4

this is really good and addicting. keep it up............................................................................................................

2yr
khazar
khazarLv5

it's fanfiction of a fanfictionish novel but it's a good read nevertheless I enjoyed it

2yr
BlackhawkRookie
BlackhawkRookieLv14

The story is very entertaining. I'm looking forward to what else the author will show us. I do wish it updated more often, but that's mostly due to being addicted to reading the story

2yr
Daos_Nine_Heavens
Daos_Nine_HeavensLv2

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2yr
Golden_Gamer_7564
Golden_Gamer_7564Lv14

Looks good, first few chapters are also good. If it changes in the future (for the worse), will change the review. But for now I recommend it.

2yr
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