Review Detail of _VIIX_ in MCU: I am 05-1

It's a nice piece of work but not without its drawbacks. .Writing Quality: 5/5, It's great. The author doubts his writing style at times but to be honest I don't see much problem with it. For sure it could be improved. There's always room for improvement afterall. But in my opinion the blurry picture that he draws is kinda interesting and fits the vibe of this fic, at least in this beginning phase where generating mystery is the main factor. He could work on the dialogues a bit to make it sound less robotic. .Story Development: 4/5, Quite decent story progression as of chapter 25. At least if we consider the MC's personal front. He started from scratch and made decent enough progress given his adversaries. As much as I want to see him curb stomping everyone in marvel with SCP powers, that would not make a proper SCP foundation story. Nor will it have much character depth. Hence I approve of what the author has done so far. A bit slow for my taste but still a decent progress. .Character Design: 4/5, needless to say I quite like the characters here. Not the marvel ones, they're a bit 1d for my taste. But they haven't had much screen time till now anyways. Hence that's okay. I like the main character. He's flawed. He's not good at this. Even with a system he's behind. But he's not some miserable no life MC that y'all sadistic readers love on this app. He has a good head on his shoulders. He makes use of it. and he makes human mistakes. he's hard working. His mistakes cost him dearly and he learns from them and does not repeat it. He's not 1d focused on a single goal. That is a good character imo. But idk if it will cater to this app's audience who prefer weak miserable MCs, and start complaining with single spark of power. Other characters in the foundation are quite fine too. Even though system generated they aren't mere puppets. And they act like good subordinates that help their leader. Being harsh at times if need be. I quite like that. .Updating Stability: 2/5, Not gonna lie it's quite bad. Like for real. Don't expect regular updates coz it doesn't have any schedule. I'd give the author the benefit of doubt that he'll complete this story someday as he promised, because I myself want it completed but I'll only believe it when I see it. .World Background: 4/5, So far it's been interesting. It's an unmapped territory and there's still way too many things to explore. We haven't even moved from the initial phases in the story so I can't rate it higher. Still I like what have seen so far. ..Overall it's a good start. Quality chapter takes time to generate. This fic certainly has quality. I won't complain much about updates so long the releases are good quality.