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Rimuru_old_cat_lol
Rimuru_old_cat_lolLv121yr
2023-03-26 00:40

wowwwww the story and writing is toooo great. .. wow just amazing. .. I will really read this novel till it ends, even if some loose arcs comes in the future I'll stick with this story. .. really good .i will also read the author's other support novel which might have been dropped till this gets more updates. .. I really really like it that's all I have to say(btw this novel now has only 24 chapters and I have read till 12 only.. and I don't want to catch up to the chapters because I hate waiting but what can I do. .i really liked it so I'll probably catch up in 4 hrs) it's been 10 days without updates. .i hope author can write more. .. and I hope author's conditions are good. .. and he get time for writing. please I pray. .. but I can't force author if he can't profit from this. .so ya if author updates it's very for me but even if no updates , no hard feelings. .. just have a good life

Levelling by the Sidelines

Tamaki_Leon
4.5
140 Chs

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Tamaki_Leon
Tamaki_LeonAuthor

Thank you so much for the review!! These few days I've been quite sick, so I haven't been able to write :( I've recently recovered and am working to get back on my feet to writing more chapters (A new chapter will come out soon). As for my other novel, unfortunately, the book is currently being rewritten, so it's on hiatus! (I haven't been able to write it much due to some outside circumstances, but I'm looking to write it again when the time comes, for now, I'm focusing on this novel.). I'm really glad you're enjoying this novel! Thank you again! :D

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Rimuru_old_cat_lol
Rimuru_old_cat_lolLv12

wow rewriting... that's the best. because most of the time a story has potential but it's written directly on a moment's thought and some not considering the impact to whole story and readers so the webnovels have many good beginning and bad mid , but if a story is rewritten it will mostly change the bad parts so it's very good.. thanks. if you have time please write..... but if you think it's waste of time then it's ok.... can't force if I can't support by monetary so just thanks for your good work

Tamaki_Leon:Thank you so much for the review!! These few days I've been quite sick, so I haven't been able to write :( I've recently recovered and am working to get back on my feet to writing more chapters (A new chapter will come out soon). As for my other novel, unfortunately, the book is currently being rewritten, so it's on hiatus! (I haven't been able to write it much due to some outside circumstances, but I'm looking to write it again when the time comes, for now, I'm focusing on this novel.). I'm really glad you're enjoying this novel! Thank you again! :D
1yr
Rimuru_old_cat_lol
Rimuru_old_cat_lolLv12

btw all your story synopsis are very good ☺

Tamaki_Leon:Thank you so much for the review!! These few days I've been quite sick, so I haven't been able to write :( I've recently recovered and am working to get back on my feet to writing more chapters (A new chapter will come out soon). As for my other novel, unfortunately, the book is currently being rewritten, so it's on hiatus! (I haven't been able to write it much due to some outside circumstances, but I'm looking to write it again when the time comes, for now, I'm focusing on this novel.). I'm really glad you're enjoying this novel! Thank you again! :D
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