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Akatsuki07
Akatsuki07Lv132yr
2023-02-04 15:24

No hate for the author but this is my honest review. . Imma start with the character design.Other than MC, we dont really know about other character.We dont know if Mc has any family.We dont know if he is in a guild.We dont know a lot of thing to be short and im sure this can be solve with more chapter.(As currently writing this review,there are 13 chapter).So im giving this a 2 out of 5 stars. Secondly would be the worldbuilding.There is nothing explain about the world Mc live in.So i give it 1 out of 5 stars.Again there are not enough chapter as of currently to evaluate. After that would be story development.According to the author pace,except for a few force plot (such as Mc sense of guilt or the college girl awakening),the story are really solid.The only problem would be not enough chapter to evaluate the novel.I give this 4 out of 5 stars. Next would be the writing quality.Im not some kind of writer or any kind of figure that would put a heavy account on writing cus for me as long as it is readable than it is good enough.I give this 5 out of 5 stars. Lastly there is update stability.There is only 13 chapter so the update is frequent.All i hope is author would not suddenly decide to go MIA when the novel reach chapter 70 - 80++.I give this 5 out of 5 stars.

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Thanks so much for the review and feedback! I'm aware of the issues regarding world background, which I hope to touch on in the upcoming chapters. I never found the opportunity to put them in earlier on since it would feel unnatural. As for MC's past and his affiliations, it'll be touched on a bit later, with some hints here and there. So there are lots to see in the future, I hope you'll stick around!

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