Tamaki_Leon

I gave it a read, and it's actually pretty good! While the writing quality has much to be desired in terms of my tastes, it's easy to read and understand, so that's fine for the most part. The author updates a lot, and I can see how hard they've worked on writing all these chapters, so good work on that! As for the story's development, I think it's pretty interesting all in all. From the characters to the scenarios, I think it's well written in the sense that there's a lot of tension, mystery and anticipation surrounding them. You won't get bored as you read, and you'll definitely want to read more about what happens. As a fan of characters, I do kind of want more, haha. I've enjoyed the ones shown so far, but I have this sinking feeling we're going to get some incredibly interesting ones soon.

Oh! Thank you so much for the review ;; I didn't think anyone would still be picking up this book given that I haven't uploaded it for a good while. Unfortunately, yeah, it's unfinished, and due to some circumstances surrounding a few things with WN, I haven't found much motivation to continue this book even though I really liked writing it... (I've essentially gone off the platform, which is why I'm no longer active on here). I'm glad you enjoyed the free chapters!! It makes me happy seeing someone comment on my novel again haha. I'm still writing, if you're curious, though! But... Not for WN anymore. I've decided to go entirely freelance with future books of mine. For the time being I don't have anything published, but I will have one soon on Tapas (this year at the very least). This book will be about the same concept as this one, but more improved! If you want to follow updates on it, or be notified I'd be more than happy to! If you'd like more info, you can join my discord server linked at the bottom of my synopsis!

Ganbaaa! Keep it up!

This book will be focused on story and character interactions/dynamics (Friendship, bonds and teamwork). Romance/Having a love interest is very secondary as of right now. I don't intend to write it.

Ganbaaa

MND = Mind

END = Endurance

Grammar wise, okay, usual to WN. I like the characters and they are a fun read. Though, it must be said that the book is pretty slow-paced, which has to do with the general concept of this novel and the whole growing up thing. I do think it's nice to see the MC grow up, but it's kind of unfortunate that we have to wait it out rn until more exciting things happen when the MC becomes a teenager or an adult. All in all, pretty good, would recommend it to people, but gotta have more chapters first, so keep it up, author!

My Instagram is Tamaki_Leon! You can shoot me a DM there

Thank you!!! :D