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Lazy_Pen_Master
Lazy_Pen_MasterLv142yr
2023-02-04 15:35

great start of novel. good character development. though one thing is that there are some cliche scenes. he says he would mind his business but he still goes out of his way to save others.other than character personality everything is good thanks for the novel.

Levelling by the Sidelines

Tamaki_Leon
4.5
140 Chs

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Tamaki_Leon
Tamaki_LeonAuthor

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying the novel so far!

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Lazy_Pen_Master
Lazy_Pen_MasterLv14

thank you to you also for this nivel

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The story has a promising plot and a very relatable main character. 🙌 The description of the background and the characters is first-class. 👌 The flow of the novel is amazing and the length of the chapters and paragraphs are enjoyable to read. The emotions and actions, you feel them and can experience them as you read. 🤌🏻 The story itself is plot-driven, with a really interesting and unique setting. 🥷🏻 I can not wait to see what else the author and Jace come up with! I hope the author will continue writing the story!

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I'll give another review after 50 chaps, but for now... I'm hooked man. The lazy protagonist and the twists of events really left me hanging... man! I can't wait for more chaps. Looking forward to it!!! 😃😃😃

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