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Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv41yr
2023-02-12 07:54

MTL chinese. The story is one where the protagonist has a stupid hero complex. The love interest is Hermione, she is 11 years old and the protagonist is 11 years old but before reincarnating he was a teenager... so the protagonist is over 28 years old in total. It is a relationship that is too forced, repeated, boring and I personally find it illogical. The Hermione in this fanfic bears no resemblance to the one in the movies or books. The author does not portray her as the girl she was in the original story, socially awkward, arrogant, hypocritical, mean-spirited, jealous, gossipy, hysterical, mean, and inexperienced in making friends. The protagonist is the typical femboy protagonist in an asian story...

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GAMING_IS_MUST
GAMING_IS_MUSTLv14

u know u just described almost every 11 year old right?

Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

Nop. Just because you're a kid doesn't mean you're such an idiot.

GAMING_IS_MUST:u know u just described almost every 11 year old right?
Dfyz58869050
Dfyz58869050Lv2

Since when did Hermione in the original become hysterical and mean? A more faithful character in the HP universe is hard to find.

BryndenRivers
BryndenRiversLv13

He is just being a lil pissbaby cause Hermione is a strong smart woman in the original story. Probably has never felt the love of a woman and is a Grand Incel of the highest order.

Dfyz58869050:Since when did Hermione in the original become hysterical and mean? A more faithful character in the HP universe is hard to find.
DaoistZack
DaoistZackLv2

11 years + 17 years of life does not make someone 28... They simply lack those years of being 18-28. He will at most be a 17yo with a brain in the developmental stage of an 11yo.

ARJ010
ARJ010Lv4

He don't go sacrificing himself for greater good... He just protect his family of 6 and for that he not only made him stronger also made his family stronger.... And for hermione he was influencing her from the begining of the plot so basically she will be different it is the surroundings that influence a persone to change..... He has backup of power and knowledge for whatever he did.... Not just going and fighting for greater good....

Salmon_El_Solomon
Salmon_El_SolomonLv3

and you are forgetting about racism

MorningWood_Dao
MorningWood_DaoLv5

there are always peoples like you who cares more about the racism rather than the mindless killing that happens in most Chinese novel. the moment the mc become godlike(which happens with most Chinese novel). he won't care about race anymore. racism won't be a problem. it's not like you got hurt reading the novel. i still won't read this novel tho, it's MTL. hurt my head reading it

Salmon_El_Solomon:and you are forgetting about racism
Salmon_El_Solomon
Salmon_El_SolomonLv3

What are you talking about? There is no racism? i focus only on racism? It always ends up in The Dragon Country or The Great Huaxia as the only world power, or the best country in the world without corruption or anything. And the rest of the countries, mainly the US and Japan, poor, bad and full of corruption... And the only deaths there are because one of those countries attacks the great huaxia from behind and then the mc does "Justice" and destroys those who attack, it is repeated 1 or 2 more times and then they destroy the country. And if that doesn't happen, he goes to another "Kingdom" where the mc befriends the prince-princess of the country and must defeat the "foreigners" that invade said country, and what a coincidence that the country he befriends has customs same as chinese...

MorningWood_Dao:there are always peoples like you who cares more about the racism rather than the mindless killing that happens in most Chinese novel. the moment the mc become godlike(which happens with most Chinese novel). he won't care about race anymore. racism won't be a problem. it's not like you got hurt reading the novel. i still won't read this novel tho, it's MTL. hurt my head reading it
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

Gai

BryndenRivers:He is just being a lil pissbaby cause Hermione is a strong smart woman in the original story. Probably has never felt the love of a woman and is a Grand Incel of the highest order.
Didar_Muratov_5750
Didar_Muratov_5750Lv1

You right in the global, but in this fic he never contacted with Chines country. And how he can be racist, if he was born in USA, go to British, Japan or the closest thing lookin like China its Gonkong? I cant say you wrong, cause we have many fic like u say, but this one not same then else one ☝️

Salmon_El_Solomon:What are you talking about? There is no racism? i focus only on racism? It always ends up in The Dragon Country or The Great Huaxia as the only world power, or the best country in the world without corruption or anything. And the rest of the countries, mainly the US and Japan, poor, bad and full of corruption... And the only deaths there are because one of those countries attacks the great huaxia from behind and then the mc does "Justice" and destroys those who attack, it is repeated 1 or 2 more times and then they destroy the country. And if that doesn't happen, he goes to another "Kingdom" where the mc befriends the prince-princess of the country and must defeat the "foreigners" that invade said country, and what a coincidence that the country he befriends has customs same as chinese...
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