Total: 4* Writing Quality: 3* Lots of word vomit going on which makes the story feel very cluttered and congested, becomes kind of a slog to read through. The dialogue feels very unnatural and robotic. I've noticed a fair few immersion-breaking and annoying typo's which makes me question why the author would ask others if English were their first language. Stability of Updates: 5* No reason to complain there, pumps out chapters a little more than once a day, though I guess there's an argument to be made that if they sacrificed update times in order to take some time to edit the quality of the writing would be much better. Story Development: 4* A little slow paced but what can you expect from the beginning. Character Design: 3* MC is VERY talkative, he speaks "like a protagonist" and by that, I mean it sounds like he has chuunibyou, basically he's a little on the cringe side but it's whatever. Characters from the canon story feel very one dimensional and just look like fuel for the MC's backstory rather than their own existence. World Background: 5* Author excels here, they do a fantastic job at accustoming you to the story right out of the gate via the MC's inner monologue. S/he also does a good job at putting you in the MC's shoes, the characters will reminisce about a past without the MC and this makes it feel like the world moves on its own. It's really hard to properly world build and the author does a bang-up job.
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