This ff is honestly great. There are little to no grammar mistakes. I keep wanting to read more. This is very enjoyable to read. I really like the hardworking mindset of the mc.

Total: 4* Writing Quality: 3* Lots of word vomit going on which makes the story feel very cluttered and congested, becomes kind of a slog to read through. The dialogue feels very unnatural and robotic. I've noticed a fair few immersion-breaking and annoying typo's which makes me question why the author would ask others if English were their first language. Stability of Updates: 5* No reason to complain there, pumps out chapters a little more than once a day, though I guess there's an argument to be made that if they sacrificed update times in order to take some time to edit the quality of the writing would be much better. Story Development: 4* A little slow paced but what can you expect from the beginning. Character Design: 3* MC is VERY talkative, he speaks "like a protagonist" and by that, I mean it sounds like he has chuunibyou, basically he's a little on the cringe side but it's whatever. Characters from the canon story feel very one dimensional and just look like fuel for the MC's backstory rather than their own existence. World Background: 5* Author excels here, they do a fantastic job at accustoming you to the story right out of the gate via the MC's inner monologue. S/he also does a good job at putting you in the MC's shoes, the characters will reminisce about a past without the MC and this makes it feel like the world moves on its own. It's really hard to properly world build and the author does a bang-up job.

Tbh not thay good. I hate the conversation like how he keeps spouting about random stuff and real gohan won't ask so many useless question like how did u think of that? Bla bla

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This here is one of those top class fics that get little exposure because of idi*ts giving bad reviews... My advice is, forget the reviews and read this fic, you won't regret it. At least up to the latest chapter when writing this review... There are such good fics with with bad reception because of bad reviews from edgy teenagers...

Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.

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Writing Quality (5 Stars): I didn't notice any grammatical errors while i was reading this Fanfic. Stability Of Updates (5 Stars): I'm not sure about this one because the author release all the current chapters in one go. But, even if from now on he started releasing chapters only one time a week it would still be ok, because they are pretty lengthy. Story Development (5 Stars): There isn't much to say about this one, because while the chapters a long, there are only a few of them. For now, i can only say that i like the way the author is developing his story. Character Design (5 Stars): The interaction between the mc and the other characters are pretty good, not the best of the best but still a lot better than most fanfics. Now talking about the mc. In the beginning i didn't like him (first two chapters), he was too robotic. I'm glad the author changed that quickly. giving him a personality. World Background (5 Stars): Dragon Ball... i don't think i need to say more. For now this is my favorite future Trunks fanfic.