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AKZALOTH
AKZALOTHLv41yr
2023-04-22 08:36

Sinceramente essa fic é um horrível, eu achei que essa fanfic tinha um protagonista inteligente mas ele foi facilmente manipulado pelo 3°hokage para ir a guerra aos 9anos, porra, cara é um adulto reencarnado no corpo de uma criança, ele teve ate desejos, ele ate assistiu o anime Naruto e o f1lh0 d4 put4 teve que ir para guerra com 9anos, isso um buraco tão grande no enredo que eu não consigo mais ler a historia sem passar raiva. Eu ate tentei fazer uma ginastica mental para inventa um motivo logico para ele ir, como: suna vai invadir e ele precisa ir ate o fronte, mas não, suna não vai invadir, no anime eles não conseguiram, o só roteiro mal feito pode contrariar esse fato. A unica boa aqui é a estabilidade de atualização, o resto não da pra saber o buraco negro no roteiro levou eles. Não recomendo

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Thanks for taking time to review and make your opinion known of how much you love to show your hate. So I give you the most reasonable gift in return.

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LegendaryChaos:Thanks for taking time to review and make your opinion known of how much you love to show your hate. So I give you the most reasonable gift in return.
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