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RayPrime
RayPrimeLv42yr
2023-01-22 14:27

Good start and interesting perks, just one request though, don't make him rack his brains to try to stop obito turning to the dark side and trying to save those that would be killed. He isnt compelled to do anything just because he is aware of certain things, if he has enough power then sure. Most fics do that and it is very irritating. Focus more on the character development

Naruto: The Mechanical Sage

LegendaryChaos
4.2
77 Chs

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America_Yea
America_YeaLv3

I'd also honestly rather he effortlessly ended danzo or effortlessly saved obi or at the very least rin.

2yr
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Cat_Tip
Cat_TipLv14

I recommend you put a picture because most people won’t bother with anything without a picture for the profile of the book and I would hate for anyone to miss this masterpiece.

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vaatu
vaatuLv4

great book (chapte46 while writing review)idk why I didn't find it till now,binge read it in one night.great pacing not tooo fast and not too slow just the way I like it. It's concept is also good.just one problem that mc is not being cautious of danzo but I guess he doesn't have to if he become a too strong.

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luxiem
luxiemLv4

Quite the enjoyable fanfiction, I like the path the main character took to get stronger.

1yr
AKZALOTH
AKZALOTHLv4

Reveal spoiler

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AinzO0alGown
AinzO0alGownLv14

I was disappointed where is the Boruto level tech I expected

2yr
Left_Nut_Of_Madara
Left_Nut_Of_MadaraLv13

Its ok but a few things seemed pointless for later in the fic so just keep in mind that if you try it.[img=exp][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins]

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Caos_Caos_
Caos_Caos_Lv1

a very good novel a shame that it is too short because of this 4.8 but the story is very good i wold have liked it if there was a rinnegan awakening but well it is good anyway

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Booksage
BooksageLv14

I think that the story had potential but the Author care to much on what others thought instead of writing for themselves also I thinks the character development while great was to rushed and that their should have been mentioned more technological detail and descorverery

1yr
Josh_5209
Josh_5209Lv13

This was hands down the best fanfic ive read on webnovel in 2 years. Its a pitty it had to end like this. Please dont loose your spark auther-sama. I love fanfics that put a realistic skill in them

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