Item: Dual Cultivator with a cultivation system
Rating: 3
Author: Psan

PsanLv51yr

2023-06-12 17:34

... well.. grammar is good. But i hated that mc basically went from sick and malnutrited level 1 kid the size of a chair with nothing that has the strenght of a sick dog... then he opens the starter pack and gets....to being level 100, 6''3 tall with 8 pack muscles. 9 inch D. With a godly rank sword, a godly rank sword skill and enough money to shame anyone, 2 godly physiques that can charm any woman alive with no effort thst has dual cultivstion and merge any new future phsyque he gets at chapter 3.... honest. He got soooo many overpowered things that is extremely excessive and ruins any progression that the story may have. Any random of these cheats is already enough but so many at once? It would have been 10 times.better of he got these slowly in a period of like 30 chapters or more

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