Item: Dual Cultivator with a cultivation system
Rating: 4.4
Author: GinJac

GinJacLv41yr

2023-04-10 17:00

Review at ch 69 The best part of this novel is the segs scenes, which are really hot and well written Very descriptive The writing is good but it's easy to see that the author doesn't have much experience with World building and character design It's more like a wish fullfilmemt The main women have a similar design with no unique character... It's more like they are a better fyc.k compared to other women Nothing special There is a sob story with each FMC and the MC gets 'over' emotional Basically it's not relatable All the villains and mobs are horni and wants to Fyc.k the FMC Overall. .. This can't be considered as a novel but a segs story Don't get me wrong, I'm not against it but I love it @Author you need to give the characters more depth and the females need to have more personality This would improve the quality of this work by a lot

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