After catching up and hearing/seeing the hate the author received for this story from a few reviewers I felt the need to throw some words on the other end of the spectrum. Grammar and syntax wise there is no issue and the proficiency of English is much better than other novels. Only issues you'll run into are some misspellings. Our MC is Yuu Tachibana, that last name should send shivers down anyone's back if they know of the history of that name from some cultured content. Never fear though as our MC lives in a mishmash of anime worlds so it's not all grim. For the first, I think, 15 chapters, we are introduced to Yuu and his family as well as aspects of his school life. This isn't padding, rather it fleshes out his and others characters so that when the Group Chat is introduced later we understand why he decides to go through with it's dangerous missions. I don't see why people would have an issue with a character's personality and view being expounded upon instead of just having a perfect character with the chat from Chapter 1. Now, regarding how the Chat itself is setup. Currently we only have 1 member (Yuu) and he has only done 1 mission but it seems to be well thought out given how it described the mission credentials and rewards/punishments. I hope the author continues the story once he is done with his other works. As some points of improvement consider the following: When it comes time for Yuu to use the points he gained try not to make him too OP and turn into a Gary Stu. Instead, it'd be better narratively if he gained powers with side effects he has to train for a while to overcome. We can see that Yuu is a bit of a kuudere towards those he cares for. Try to add some extra examples of him being caring or people seeing how caring he is even if he is not outright with it. This will likely stop people saying he's too unemotional when he really does care but shows it in non direct ways. Keep up the great work!
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