Ok so I am going to give it 5 stars I myself wrote it, but I am biased bite me. Anyway, the main reason I am writing this review is for the new readers you will likely see the reviews first. The story is slow, not slow in progression but it feels slow because of the low amount of chapter updates, like I only update 3 chapters a week, each chapter being 1500 words, so it is bound to look slow. Another reason for it being slow is I am trying to build the character of the mc and the people around him. It is in the synopsis that the mc will be taking the dimensional chat group to save his family that is a given. But it won't really be as good if we don't know how the family is or how Mc normally behaves in his day-to-day life, Of course, such things can't be done so quickly for me as I tend to write a bit more descriptively and often end up going on a tangent but if you pay attention even the tangents serve their purpose of solidifying the characters that are already there. I know this might be triggering for many readers who are used to the fast development of the chat group fics or fics in general found these days, where the mc gets the chat group/Cheat or power in the first chapter and a mission in the next, but don't you ever feel like 'Why did he accept it like it was no big deal?' 'What are his motivations for doing so?' At times like these there are cliche reason's like 'He is reincarnated so he doesn't think it is weird,' or 'I need to save my family/I want to get stronger to protect my family' I get that it is the same motivation my mc has. But right now I am giving the reason he is willing to go that far, I am telling you through the scenarios that the mc thinks that his family is worth risking his life for rather than just saying it clearly 'I want to protect my family,' because then it looks like a shallow reason that has no substance or base to it in the readers mind. and the mc will be labeled as generic 'I want to save people' before the reader even makes it to the next chapter. I know it happens because I do it myself. And so I have a small message for those that will say 'It is slow' First, consume what is in front of you before asking for more, That is the basic courtesy. You do not understand half of the things that has happened in the nine chapters that are out currently. The chapters are littered with hints you just need to run your brain a little that has been turned off by reading crack fics all day and you'll like the direction, but you'd rather have the answer handed to you on the platter. Anyway, Thank you for reading this. it means a lot to me. if you want faster updates and more chapters use the power stones you have 500 of those equal to one chapter. Also, comment if you find one of the details in the chapters so that others can see what can happen if you use your brain while reading. And comment to reach out to me if you have any questions I'll answer them to the best of my ability, Once again Thank you and Bye~.
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can you have raven/rachel Roth from dc universe and punisher from the marvel universe join the group chat
marvel and DC verse are the ones I can't write about because I have no idea how the story is, I don't anything about them aside from the movies,
SAURON_:can you have raven/rachel Roth from dc universe and punisher from the marvel universe join the group chatimage
Honestly my only dislike is the whole Overused Mangaka Trope, God I hate it so much lol.
surely the reason I gave was a good one, and anyway I'd rather just go with troupe then try to explain how he made money off stocks and businesses,
Ballad:Honestly my only dislike is the whole Overused Mangaka Trope, God I hate it so much lol.
Ahhhh surly another masterpiece like the previous 2. But I'm quite curious what kind of world will he visit and what kind of chat group members will he befriend and will he get some Fate wifus.....ops my real desire have shown them self 😂😅
I smell some freshly baked sarcasm here,
Chaos_Order8:Ahhhh surly another masterpiece like the previous 2. But I'm quite curious what kind of world will he visit and what kind of chat group members will he befriend and will he get some Fate wifus.....ops my real desire have shown them self 😂😅
I can be as serious as it gets when I mention Fate Wifus. 😂 Good luck on this 3rd FF.
OVERLOAD69:I smell some freshly baked sarcasm here,
will the harem be large? if a pokemon captures, will he establish his country with his harem. i hate harems
I don't really want it to over 10, but if that is large for you I can't say much, also I would focus on the plot a more than harem.
Thehighest_throne2:will the harem be large? if a pokemon captures, will he establish his country with his harem. i hate harems
Is this a slice of life? I didn’t see a tag but a story like this I would kinda expect it
it is slice of life when the Mc is in his home world, there is much going on there
AbyssalHunger:Is this a slice of life? I didn’t see a tag but a story like this I would kinda expect it
