A standard shameless author review, I am attempting to have some actual world building that I find lacking in other COTE fan fiction instead of just following the original plot with little to no impact on the story itself. I also want to give other characters besides the main OC their own perspective so they don't seem too '2D' if that makes sense. I think by doing this I will be able to allow the readers to immerse themselves into the book

The story is quite entertaining, 100% recommended. ...................................................................................................

Gonna be honest with ya chief this whole fic is just about glazing the oc main character. Mc is just another Mary Sue with no personality. Did she really say she can manipulate ayanokoji within few months?I personally don't even like ayanokoji as a character but come on this is just glazing on another lvl at least make some realistic senerio instead dumbing down others to make the mc look cool and better.

loved the OC character and the world building

Didn't find any good fanfics? But wrote some lesbian nonsense.I feel like you just don't like any work that doesn't feature lesbians ...............................................................

It’s surprisingly nice and refreshing to read. the author avoids most of the clichés that we often find in this kind of fan fiction. .......................................................

COTE is a hard Fiction to use as a basis while doing it right. I really love the series and want to see more good FFs for it so good luck.

Quite the decent fanfic, not many FL cote fanfics so it makes for killing some time. Grammar is good by standards of this app, story has its own sense of direction and development. Updating stability is what it is. The biggest and perhaps only issues that occur are with the mc. You gotta remember author-san, when writing a ‘smart’ character you need to focus on showing rather then telling. In my opinion, the mc is praised a bit too much and it’s almost like she’s aware of it, because throughout the fic her attitude is in general like ‘life is easy and I’m running circles around everyone without even trying’. I’m not saying the make her a female kiyotaka who’s reserved about her abilities, just tone it down a bit and you’ll have a interesting mc instead of a Mary Sue.

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