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skyhound
skyhoundLv141yr
2022-12-31 23:29

I'm only on chapter 7 and am really enjoying this so far. I love the genuine wonder the Mc has for Pandora. This fic is definitely scratching that Avatar itch I have. Especially after seeing Avatar Way of Water. Keep up the great work author.

A Second Chance - Avatar Way of Water

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I genuinely tried so hard to continue reading this, but it’s just gotten to be too much. The MC is literally USELESS. He can’t do a single thing that the Navi can do without being spoonfed every single little thing. I mean, he’s at least 3x slower than Jake, even though he’s supposed to be some sort of genius. And the romance is competely forced. As soon as he saves her, she’s instantly extremely attached to him. That might work in an anime fic or something, but this is a semi-realistic movie we’re talking about. But I could care less about the extremely forced romance. It’s just absolutely infuriating to see the MC who’s supposed to be a genius failing at literally everything.

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DetachedDreamer
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an Avatar fanfic was something I didn't know i wanted until this week. this is the second one I read this week that I love. everything about this story is unique and entertaining. Im loving the update speed too. Topnotch writing quality, keep it up.

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