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KingSalvation
KingSalvationLv22yr
2023-01-10 07:14

I am a person who give honest review, and most of them are harsh but....This fanfic is actually amazing. At first I was skeptical since this is the first Avatar fanfic I've read, and I have high expectations when it comes to reading, but this surpasses my expectations. The mc is not op and is learning in a realistic phase. The romance is a bit rushed but till acceptable. The mc is embracing the Navi ways but is still keeping his human side. and most importantly, it's not harem (stupid harem, breaking good fanfics) overall, I highly recommend this to readers who likes avatar

A Second Chance - Avatar Way of Water

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37 Chs

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I genuinely tried so hard to continue reading this, but it’s just gotten to be too much. The MC is literally USELESS. He can’t do a single thing that the Navi can do without being spoonfed every single little thing. I mean, he’s at least 3x slower than Jake, even though he’s supposed to be some sort of genius. And the romance is competely forced. As soon as he saves her, she’s instantly extremely attached to him. That might work in an anime fic or something, but this is a semi-realistic movie we’re talking about. But I could care less about the extremely forced romance. It’s just absolutely infuriating to see the MC who’s supposed to be a genius failing at literally everything.

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an Avatar fanfic was something I didn't know i wanted until this week. this is the second one I read this week that I love. everything about this story is unique and entertaining. Im loving the update speed too. Topnotch writing quality, keep it up.

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