Overall this story really have potential, start with good character development even though at the beginning I judging it to fast about protagonist personalities but you really pull it off, just once thing I wish from you make him a dense sigma male protagonist, he will never be dense like bell I understand that, but he will dense because his because he have low self-esteem, and it will fit the story perfectly, Dense protagonist is the best!!!!!!! make dense protagonist!!!!!!!!! and don't forget about Sigma, yes he should be Sigma!!!!!!!
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LIKEWell you can say I have reference for low-self esteem like Hikikaya Hachiman who have harem but simply always thinking negative because he have scar in his heart and doesn't know that girl have feeling for him because for him that simply doesn't possibly and so he will always speaking sarcastic toward them.
3RR0R_404:Can you really be called a "Sigma" if you can't even tell that someone has feeling for you and have low self-esteem?