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CruelReality
CruelRealityLv51yr
2023-07-18 13:01

I had extremely high hopes based upon the authors previous story and the description and so far I would say I am quite disappointed. As of 49 chapters this feels like a slice of life interspersed with random moments of drama wherein the MC gets injured and or hurt but his mysterious clans inheritance and needs to be rescued by tsunade. I think the inheritance of his clan is quite cool, but seeing a genius assassin rise in power within a unique bloodline would’ve been more interesting IMO. Also, the MC does not feel like an intelligent and cold blooded genius. He seems to barely train and to constantly put himself in danger. There are also some minor details like author seems to indicate that the MC has a good relationship with his younger sister and the we hear nothing of her after the start. Anyway, perhaps this will have an epic twist and get way darker and better but as of now I see nothing to set it aside from the usual MID naruto fic, 6/10 slightly above average at best.

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ForgottenLife
ForgottenLifeAuthor

Worry not the story has just barely started, like barely. It's a slow pace story and even Minato Kushina are also the main side characters with character development for them. So yeah, a slow pace story.

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R0BLv2

That's the problem...

ForgottenLife:Worry not the story has just barely started, like barely. It's a slow pace story and even Minato Kushina are also the main side characters with character development for them. So yeah, a slow pace story.
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Rk6TLv4

I have few issues with the story. First issue is that the story is way too slow paced, almost no progress even after 66 chapters. Second issue is the MC himself… Author has given us a cool backstory about a man who was deemed one of the best assassins of not the best, cold hearted individual who had almost no emotions, yet as soon as he wakes up, he is instant more caring, feels love towards a little sister and over all has a positive personality, he shows care towards everyone he meets, he knows he requires power in order to survive but instead of getting stronger, he makes stupid decisions that almost kill him and lands him in the hospital on numerous occasions. He is spending more time with “friends” than studying new was to improve his strength, he could try and mix his old skills with chakra and enhance them if possible but so far we haven’t seen much of that. Anyway, author informed us that the story will take a darker turn but Idk how long we have to wait, considering it took 66 chapters just for MC to age by 2 years (he is 7 currently) it might take 100 more chapters just for academy graduation and another 200 before mc becomes jonin. Aside from those issues the story isn’t bad compared to the rest of the things in Webnovel. I’ll save it in my library and keep an eye on it but so far it’s too boring to read. I hope my review doesn’t discourage the author from writing but I had to be honest. Ps. This is my personal opinion and someone else might see the story differently, if you are interested, I suggest you give it a try.

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