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ForgottenLife
ForgottenLifeAuthor2yr
2022-12-20 19:38

This will be my second Naruto novel. The first being Reborn In Naruto As Madara's Grandson. This will be a long story with an expected 500 chapters with each chapter being around 1.5k words. I will use some elements from my previous novel but they will be specified. Now, for the novel and the main character. The main character is an anti-hero. There will be tragedy and lots of characters will die and shape the MC in a rogue demon. The start will be light-hearted and will progress gradually.

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QBL
QBLLv4

Thanks for your stories, no harem please

ForgottenLife
ForgottenLifeAuthor

There won't be any harem.

QBL:Thanks for your stories, no harem please
AvgNovelReader
AvgNovelReaderLv4

how many chapters till end of izuna's story?

ForgottenLife:There won't be any harem.
ForgottenLife
ForgottenLifeAuthor

about 150 more

AvgNovelReader:how many chapters till end of izuna's story?
ILovemyself_84
ILovemyself_84Lv4

Romance?

ForgottenLife:There won't be any harem.
Ryofu
RyofuLv11

ForgottenLife:There won't be any harem.
Azathoth2
Azathoth2Lv4

ForgottenLife:There won't be any harem.
Slime_Monarch_Sui
Slime_Monarch_SuiLv4

One of Us?

ForgottenLife:There won't be any harem.
octoberwind
octoberwindLv4

It Should have been your last like what up with these garbage Naruto fanfic were the cheat

LOBO_0816
LOBO_0816Lv13

kill hiruzen..

CloudSmoke
CloudSmokeLv5

So, is he an actual demon or do they just called him a demon?

Mister_Robot
Mister_RobotLv4

try Naruto : The Wind Calamity. it's awesome

Dioscaido12
Dioscaido12Lv4

Kushina True Wife?

ForgottenLife:There won't be any harem.
Other Reviews
Rk6T
Rk6TLv4

I have few issues with the story. First issue is that the story is way too slow paced, almost no progress even after 66 chapters. Second issue is the MC himself… Author has given us a cool backstory about a man who was deemed one of the best assassins of not the best, cold hearted individual who had almost no emotions, yet as soon as he wakes up, he is instant more caring, feels love towards a little sister and over all has a positive personality, he shows care towards everyone he meets, he knows he requires power in order to survive but instead of getting stronger, he makes stupid decisions that almost kill him and lands him in the hospital on numerous occasions. He is spending more time with “friends” than studying new was to improve his strength, he could try and mix his old skills with chakra and enhance them if possible but so far we haven’t seen much of that. Anyway, author informed us that the story will take a darker turn but Idk how long we have to wait, considering it took 66 chapters just for MC to age by 2 years (he is 7 currently) it might take 100 more chapters just for academy graduation and another 200 before mc becomes jonin. Aside from those issues the story isn’t bad compared to the rest of the things in Webnovel. I’ll save it in my library and keep an eye on it but so far it’s too boring to read. I hope my review doesn’t discourage the author from writing but I had to be honest. Ps. This is my personal opinion and someone else might see the story differently, if you are interested, I suggest you give it a try.

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