I can't actually remember the last time I wrote a review, maybe it was a year ago or something, but it isn't really too important. Anyway, since it's my fanfiction I'll put 5 star naturally, since it's literally the manifestation of my ideal fanfiction, but I can't say the same for others though. This might ironic coming from me, but I'll do my best to finish this. Either, there is much I want to say since everything I want people to know is literally in the summary already.

The story was good at first, but the main character has no sense of ownership.In short, the first thing I disliked was the Shiro x Lorelei couple. (The chapters where Shirou was whi*ped and the relationship was totally forced). And go to Kuroino world (a hen*ai world),Instead of saving a rated character beforehand, she gets involved in the story after she was ra*ed. I'm sorry but I refuse to read a story that includes ra*e and hentai.good luck to you all.(Re-review after deletion)

The author deleted all reviews so I won't write a long review.There is r*pe in the story...........................................................................................................................

where is the 1 star review I thought before this fanfic rating was 3.5...................................................................................................................

I really love all your works Charlotte sensai but at lesst finish them first, then start a new one, u will definitely or most likely will Lose interest in the previous ones like that.

Reveal spoiler

I really like your stories Charlotte and this story also has promise but, you should really focus more on your stories considering all the stories that you left hanging or you just forgotten.

Parece que el autor borró todas las calificaciones bajas, El MC tiene una relación con personajes de H de violaciones . 🤮🤮🤮🤮[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Well, I'm really sorry about your dad, but that doesn't change my opinion... Fanfic. All the action in the store is the same (when a new customer shows up). Also, I don't remember exactly because it's been a long time since I read it, but I definitely remember the problem with the MC and his Chinese stereotype persona. Well, the rating should have been 3.5-3.7, but you just deleted the reviews. Disappointment.

Pretty bad OC and Force interactions, and imagine shipping Lorelei and Shirou Emiya being Lorelei his sister? Simply disgusting as it's obvious it'll be quite force and I won't even bother seeing it through.