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Review Detail of ASHBORN in A Marvelous Loop (Discontinued)

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ASHBORN
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The story started well until he jumped to Fate..................................................................................................

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A Marvelous Loop (Discontinued)

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Greatlove
GreatloveLv4Greatlove

Even fate arc was ok, but after that is total disaster, *Sigh* he went to bleach and it end pretty badly, The Most annoying thing about MC is, he never learns, Author says he MC is not perfect, he just a normal person who was through in this situation, but even a normal person were to die these many times and to not learn a thing or not is dumb, All I can say is that start and concept was good, I think this is author's first work so I think everyone should go easy and give it a try, maybe you find its worth your time

Zizinho21
Zizinho21Lv4Zizinho21

Ugh fate

Anonny_Anonymous
Anonny_AnonymousLv1Anonny_Anonymous

Agreed.

DaoistaYohan
DaoistaYohanLv1DaoistaYohan

E porquê você acha isso? Fate é como qualquer outro universo, DC, Marvel etc. Eu pessoalmente adorei "ver" ele lutando com o Lancer, tentando sobreviver a ele, assim como eu adoraria ver ele lutando contra o Batman ou tendo um debate filosófico sobre Matar e Não Matar com o Bruce!

David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4David_Drake

ugh

MLakuru
MLakuruLv4MLakuru

You pretty just said this is trash and then tell us to give it a try? Yea no thanks.

Greatlove:Even fate arc was ok, but after that is total disaster, *Sigh* he went to bleach and it end pretty badly, The Most annoying thing about MC is, he never learns, Author says he MC is not perfect, he just a normal person who was through in this situation, but even a normal person were to die these many times and to not learn a thing or not is dumb, All I can say is that start and concept was good, I think this is author's first work so I think everyone should go easy and give it a try, maybe you find its worth your time
Nyxio
NyxioLv4Nyxio

thnx now I know to avoid this mistake. Never liked fate and bleach anyways.

Greatlove:Even fate arc was ok, but after that is total disaster, *Sigh* he went to bleach and it end pretty badly, The Most annoying thing about MC is, he never learns, Author says he MC is not perfect, he just a normal person who was through in this situation, but even a normal person were to die these many times and to not learn a thing or not is dumb, All I can say is that start and concept was good, I think this is author's first work so I think everyone should go easy and give it a try, maybe you find its worth your time
E_Mendez
E_MendezLv4E_Mendez

fate should be canceled and anyone who what anything to do with it also needs to be canceled

SMomoTempest
SMomoTempestLv14SMomoTempest

Random R.O.B: Oh, interesting ...then...

E_Mendez:fate should be canceled and anyone who what anything to do with it also needs to be canceled
Random_0P_Being
Random_0P_BeingLv1Random_0P_Being

Hmm though i like some characters from fate but yeah the whole series is one big cluster fk, tbh i hate anything that has a time traveling thing because if the author dosen't do it correctly (which they mostly don't) it just pretty much the end of the novel for me.

E_Mendez:fate should be canceled and anyone who what anything to do with it also needs to be canceled
E_Mendez
E_MendezLv4E_Mendez

If you want a good time trave story read (Mother of Learning) it’ a dam good read.

Random_0P_Being:Hmm though i like some characters from fate but yeah the whole series is one big cluster fk, tbh i hate anything that has a time traveling thing because if the author dosen't do it correctly (which they mostly don't) it just pretty much the end of the novel for me.