hard to follow, due to grammar errors, jumbled sentences, probably be better if it was edited more, for better flow. but just couldn't get past ch. 4 because it was just to confusing.
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LIKEI understand you perfectly, but I can't help myself, while writing fan fiction, the writing style limped on both legs, and the machine translator only worsened the quality of the text. In the following fanfiction, in my opinion, the author's skill has grown a little and the machine translator began to translate more smoothly and correctly:)))