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well here's something that's going to get you upset you need to get somebody that can edit that knows English because this is not horrible but it is still bad story seems good but the translation just no
I understand you perfectly, but I don't have any translators I know, and looking for someone on the side means paying someone money, and maybe if the amount were small I would think about it(I'm a poor student)
Gh0st00:well here's something that's going to get you upset you need to get somebody that can edit that knows English because this is not horrible but it is still bad story seems good but the translation just no
why not try ~ GRAMMERLY first (& it's free)
Wasilisk100:I understand you perfectly, but I don't have any translators I know, and looking for someone on the side means paying someone money, and maybe if the amount were small I would think about it(I'm a poor student)image
Well if you add a crossover with the original and teenwolf then the vampire themselves are much stronger since all vampires would descend from the originals and not be the fake vampires of twilight that Couldn't fight a few wolves that weren't even werewolves also werewolves would exist here being the ones of teenwolf instead in twilight they were all killed by the volturi fk i don't know even if the volturi exist since klaus would probably wipe them out for even bothering him and he would be much stronger if he has abilities like the fake vampires of twilight but well i hope they at least don't twinkle in The sun that really was s*ìt also there would be the hunters of teen wolf. Bro i have to say you did an interesting world but if there are the originals then there should the ones of the vampire diaries if you can portray klaus and the originals well and if you can correct me to what the Things i wrote above would be i will definitely put this in The list of the must read 👍
It's a crossover with the originals and Teenwolf, but not in the way you think, read the chapters and you'll find out)
Ronin46:Well if you add a crossover with the original and teenwolf then the vampire themselves are much stronger since all vampires would descend from the originals and not be the fake vampires of twilight that Couldn't fight a few wolves that weren't even werewolves also werewolves would exist here being the ones of teenwolf instead in twilight they were all killed by the volturi fk i don't know even if the volturi exist since klaus would probably wipe them out for even bothering him and he would be much stronger if he has abilities like the fake vampires of twilight but well i hope they at least don't twinkle in The sun that really was s*ìt also there would be the hunters of teen wolf. Bro i have to say you did an interesting world but if there are the originals then there should the ones of the vampire diaries if you can portray klaus and the originals well and if you can correct me to what the Things i wrote above would be i will definitely put this in The list of the must read 👍
At least tell me that if mc becomes a vampire it is not one of those fake vampires and when this reaches 30 chap i will read them all together xD
Wasilisk100:It's a crossover with the originals and Teenwolf, but not in the way you think, read the chapters and you'll find out)image
Hehehe he will be a vampire (Twilight), but that's about to change... ...and he will become something more than a parody of vampires (sorry Twilight fans, but vampires there really are some inferior...)
Ronin46:At least tell me that if mc becomes a vampire it is not one of those fake vampires and when this reaches 30 chap i will read them all together xD
Ok then i will read it the moment it reaches thirty chap though i will have to keep an high level of effort to endure him being a fake vampire since most of the time i envision myself like i was the mc xD also it would be super interesting if he had a mate bond with Rebecca she is the most beautiful of them all second place is hayley the women of teen wolf and twilight can't compare to those two
Wasilisk100:Hehehe he will be a vampire (Twilight), but that's about to change... ...and he will become something more than a parody of vampires (sorry Twilight fans, but vampires there really are some inferior...)
