I know the grammer needs work but this is my first project, plz go little easy on me, but i always welcome constructive criticism. i m trying to better my writing so you all can enjoy this story, like i said in the Synopsis this is going to be a slow burn story, mc will get weak to strong slowly.

To many abilities. Just the druid thing was enough and personally I'm not a big fan of giving up memories of the world. But overal it's pretty decent.

I actually really like this story and feel it CAN grow to be something really fun to read. However, we're over 50 chapters in and it's STILL just MC constantly training and being pretty prideful when, as a smallfolk, that's just asking for enemies. Also the chapters are pretty short, the update schedule is really good though so it's not that bad. I don't know how I feel about losing his knowledge of the GoT world because at the rate he's going, I don't see him being any more than a household guard or a nomad that travels. If he is a commoner and has no future knowledge of the GoT world, I really don't see him being of any real importance in the canon storyline besides being good with a sword.

80 chapter long filler/training arc. Interesting idea but slow and boring to read. You can skip easily 5 chapters without having missed anything. Timeline of the story makes no sense it's off by around 10 years (281 was Roberts Rebellion in Canon and Robb and Jon birth, here they are 7-8 years old.) I believe so no idea how far away from the story beginning we are at least 4 years which took already 80 chapters training/filler. Not really a good read, no idea why there only are 5 star review.

The mc never gets his mind into the medival society. The author made him a commoner with too many OP gifts. He believes as if he is invincible and opposes everyone. Nobles will directly kill him off for half the things he did. He is still a kid till this point of plot. Well its a fanfic maybe the future plot can get better.

the story is average and cliche but that's normal, the story is slow, it would be nice if the mc plans to travel and learn more about magic, the mc seems to have some ambitions, apart from training he doesn't do much to prepare for the future, he doesn't even have a henchman.

Evaluation: Average (could've been better if it's not too long winded). WQ: With less to no mistake grammatical errors and a well thought/structured storyline, plus long chapters. 5/5 SD: With a slow to average pace development which focus too much on MC's character building which is affecting the story & MC progression that created a couple of plot holes. Btw, story is still on early pace (Robb & Jon 11years old) MC is 10yrs old as of Chapter 50. 2/5 CD: MC is a SI-OC (5x learning in all aspect & druidic magik) this could've been better if he utilizes his previous life experiences & foreknowledge of GOT/ASOIAFverse. MC is quick witted but lacks maturity which author-san kept on saying that he is matured that is so confusing. In addition, he has adult mentality which author-san kept on mentioning but can't adapt to a medieval lifestyle with a his boon of 5x learning that is so contradicting. Up until chapter 50 MC's persona is still in building pace with his 5x learning and previous life experiences plus his foreknowledge of the world. 2/5 US: The speed of upload or update of chapters is on par with the quality of this FF. 3/5 WB: As the story is still in the development phase we haven't noticed any other branch of magic or part of the magic world explored. 4/5 Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD

has great potential but have to ask what you mean 500 chapter? like you want this story to go on for that long?

The story was okay at first but when author gets to chapter 150 or so starts using ai completely ruined the novel for me and not most of the chapters are like a Chinese light novel explaining stuff just in details none stop. A lot of authors are using so and it’s ruining their stories please stop using it and write it your self. I love the beginning of the story but it now another great book ruined by ai book writing.

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