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FoodReviewSnake
FoodReviewSnakeLv42yr
2022-12-23 22:25

This is an edgy teens fantasy being a underground mysterious boss, taking revenge on your evil uncle who killed your parents, talking about how smart you are at every chapter, out of place comedy in every tense situation which ruins the chapter and gravity of the situation. While I do love a evil mc this is something that needs critiscm. Otherwise this is authors second book he has no problems with the basics and I am just saying from a readers point of view that I would read this just to pass time when I dont have anything decent to read. But it can improve so author dont let this demotivate you, I will be sticking around to see which direction this novel takes since it still has potential.

Project Salvation: Rise of the Venomous Snake

ThePotatoKing
4.7
20 Chs

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ThePotatoKing
ThePotatoKingAuthor

Thanks a lot for the review! This story is basically supposed to be a sort of light-hearted power fantasy for me to take a breather from my other book. Hence, the out-of-place humour and over-exaggerated main character. He is essentially a flawed character and I do plan to knock some sense into him later on... but the overall tone of the story is going to be similar. If you are looking for a more mature series I do recommend taking a look at my other book Masquerade of Madness. While the first few chapters... might be a little raw and face similar issues, phase 2 (chapter 20 onwards) is one of the most gripping sections of fiction I have ever written. The aim of the story as a whole is to deal with darker issues, trauma and has a lot of horror/thriller aspects. If that's what you are into and looking for, you won't be disappointed!

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FoodReviewSnake
FoodReviewSnakeLv4

Yeah writing is not ez

ThePotatoKing:Thanks a lot for the review! This story is basically supposed to be a sort of light-hearted power fantasy for me to take a breather from my other book. Hence, the out-of-place humour and over-exaggerated main character. He is essentially a flawed character and I do plan to knock some sense into him later on... but the overall tone of the story is going to be similar. If you are looking for a more mature series I do recommend taking a look at my other book Masquerade of Madness. While the first few chapters... might be a little raw and face similar issues, phase 2 (chapter 20 onwards) is one of the most gripping sections of fiction I have ever written. The aim of the story as a whole is to deal with darker issues, trauma and has a lot of horror/thriller aspects. If that's what you are into and looking for, you won't be disappointed!
2yr
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lord_of_all_realm_Lv5

Finally a good refreshing book, with a smart, cunning mc, AND (depending on your world views) also evil (definitely evil) , not in a barbarian way but more of Aizen form bleach way. Overall I highly recommend reading this book.

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ThePotatoKing
ThePotatoKingAuthor

Author's mandatory self 5-star here. I will use this space as an FAQ to give you a heads-up about what to expect. You can also reply to this and I will answer your questions. 1) There's no harem. In fact, there might not even be any romance. I do have a love interest planned but... given the MC's personality at the start of the story, forming genuine relationships won't be easy. 2) The story does follow a weak-to-strong format but the MC does kinda overpower everyone using underhanded schemes and tactics so this story technically fits into the OP theme for the fantasy carnival. 3) The story's main focal point will be the mission world where the MC is sent along with other hero candidates. Each mission world will be a battle royale against the other candidates as well as uprooting the forces of the demon lord in that dimension. Plenty of action and scheming to go around. 4) This is my second decent attempt at a book so expect decent quality. Of course, I still haven't perfected my writing style and am still trying my best to improve every day, so there should be an upwards trend in quality as the story goes on. 5) If there are any complaints about the story or if there are any tips for me to improve my writing, please feel free to share them. Just don't be rude. 6) That's all for now, I hope everyone enjoys the story.

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Zuzu_1
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I genuinely love the concept behind this story, all the characters are great, especially the MC. a job well-done author because am enjoying your story so far even if the chapters aren't many yet[img=update][img=update]

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GigiBlack
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Now this is the kind of MC I've been looking for. I'm already obsessed with this story Author keep doing an amazing job and I'll be right there to support you.🧛🏾‍♂️🖤

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NobleRemmy
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Wow! wow!..A standing ovation for the author of this novel. you had me intrigued, occupied, and even making calculations in my head, that's how engrossed I was while reading. I am highly impressed! 👏 👏 👏

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This story has a main character who is pragmatic, and very, very cold-blooded. He will not hesitate to do what's necessary for his survival, and it's kind of a breath of fresh air to see a MC who commits 'evil' actions without remorse. If you're going to go, then run, right? If you're into intricate mind-games, interesting plot twists, and firm, calculating protagonists, this story'll do ya right!

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BishopsNemesis
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I was thoroughly impressed. The plot was intricate and kept me engaged from start to finish. The characters were well-developed and their motivations were clear and believable. But what really stood out for me was the writing style. The author's descriptive language painted a vivid picture of the setting and the emotions of the characters. I felt like I was right there in the room with the protagonist, experiencing everything firsthand. The themes of fate, destiny, and the cutthroat world of business were explored in a thought-provoking and compelling way. The twist at the end was a complete shock and left me wanting more at end of chapter 5.

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Nevermindthename
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Nothing to complain about writing quality. The story concept is most definitely interesting. It's not completely new in itself, has a little bit of different ideas but with its own unique twist. The MC and the different characters we have seen so far in volume 1 is what drew me to this story. You can easily get an idea on MC's personality from the synopsis and other reviews. What stood out to me is even with being scheming, controlling and rational, he hasn't forgotten to have fun and loosen up in his own way. I suppose the comedy tag's there for a reason (the MC doesn't joke around unironically). The author has somewhat managed to bring the other characters alive as well. It's too early to tell now, but how far he can take them remains to be seen. Would like to see them grow and develop individually, if they survive. All in all this could be the start of something remarkable. Good luck.

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GrandSky
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Oh gawd! This book was amazing! Didn't really like the 1st person perspective tho, but it ain't changing the fact that I love it! You my friend, just gave me some inspiration! Thanks man!

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