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2023-06-02 17:37

Way too heavy on the faceslapping. I can barely read this. Oh, and all the antagonists are evil for no reason at all. We have the government officials who tortured the MC's parents to death ...for fun? Followed by two young masters who seem to have no purpose in life other than trying to mess with the MC.

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Urgh, sounds terrible.

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