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AbAdDoN
AbAdDoNLv142yr
2023-01-13 22:17

is this one of those novels in which MC lost his parents in the childhood and after becoming strong i.e. after some decades suddenly his parents reappears they became a happy loving family ? Because this setting seems kinda forced as having lost ones parents in the childhood, people can't remember what happened when they were one or two years old therefore after a few decades I don't think there will be any kind of attachment between them and if they meet each other after such a long time, there will be only awkwardness. So, this is really a forced setting. So Author can you clear this doubt about this novel whether this also has this type of setting or not ?

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One_Winged_Angel
One_Winged_AngelAuthor

No, it’s not going to be like that at all, I have really great plots regarding his family.

AbAdDoN
AbAdDoNLv14

thanks for clearing doubt and by the way a great novel so far and hope the quality won't degrade in the future

One_Winged_Angel:No, it’s not going to be like that at all, I have really great plots regarding his family.
One_Winged_Angel
One_Winged_AngelAuthor

Absolutely! I’m glad you’re enjoying it. I won’t sacrifice my level of quality. I’ll wrap up the story before that happens.

AbAdDoN:thanks for clearing doubt and by the way a great novel so far and hope the quality won't degrade in the future
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